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I think this site is good because we will think about who will be reading our writing, it will give us a purpose to write and we will be able to get people to give us two stars and a wish.

by Peter

I think the blogging site will help our writing because if we do two stars and a wish with other schools, they can correct our regular mistakes!

By Rachael

This website helps us with our writing.

by chloe

Blogging is good because other people can read our writing and comment on it. If people give me good comments for my writing then I will keep writing for the site. Another reason why it is good is because we can read other people’s writing and we can comment on it.

by Cameron

Blogging helps us with our writing and doing stories. I think Blogging is fun and helps us with are writing.

From Olivia

I think that the blogging site will definetly help us with our writing. I think it will help because its more creative and exciting than just sitting in class and doing it. Instead of the teacher doing the two stars and a wish, Greenhill school are going to do it!
I think thats GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By Isla!

Hi!
Blogging helps us become better writers and also lets the world see our writing

By Amber

I think blogging will help my writing because I can see what people think of my writing and I can improve on it. Another reason is if the other school makes comments they don’t know me so they can say what they want and I won’t take any offence.

By Leila

Hi!
I think blogging helps us by to improving our writing. With this site people round the world can look at our poems and writing!

By Lauryn

Thanks For Reading!

That’s just Halloween!!!

On this very special night,
Something might just give you a fright!
Jump out and give a scare,
Shiver in the costume that you wear!
That’s just Halloween!

You wander in the crowded streets,
Wondering who you might just meet,
Then you feel something tickle your feet,
With fear you freeze,
But it was just the breeze!
That’s just Halloween!

The ghosts float past,
You don’t want Halloween to last!
You hear a scream,
You wish it was all a dream!
That’s just Halloween!

You go in and chap someone’s door,
The people open up with a bowl of sweets galore!
Then you look up and realise they are ghosts,
You run and hit your head against a lamp post!
That’s just Halloween!

Please have a very good Halloween,
Make sure that you are seen!
Crisps and sweets for everyone,
So go and have fun!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

By Rachael