Cross Country
On Saturday I went to a cross country event.
I had to take part in a race that was a mile long.
This took place at cambuslang rugby club. It was really muddy up there and me and Amber were covered in mud from head to toe.When you were runing you just wanted to give up but I diden’t I kept going.
I got a silver medle whitch I am quite proud of. I never knew Iwould get a medle so I left and Miss Watt had to go up and get it for me! When I got home everyone was very,very proud of me for doing it! IT WAS A GREAT DAY!!
By Louise
March 19th, 2008 at 6:15 am
I liked how you were said you were runing cross country and you told us that you won a silver medle and that you got all muddy but i still went but dont put like very very twice in a row it sound like only wasteing space.
March 19th, 2008 at 6:20 am
think this interview was very good.Ithink that the words like (i had to take part in a race) was good and also (from haed to toe).I think used very good vocablary todescribe there was also good is that she\he did nott give up on running and its suprising that they had run for a mile long thats great so i think that there is noting wrong with this paragraph and that there is just a little bit of suprising things and its nice to go home and everyone is proud of you.
name:Louise
tittle:Cross Country
March 21st, 2008 at 12:41 pm
Got your comments. Thanks for replying.
And thanks for saying you liked it.
Bye Bye!!
March 25th, 2008 at 12:54 pm
Hi Its Louise and I am just telling you I like your sorry hands.
And I am here telling you to keek up the good work.
By Louise xxx
May 13th, 2008 at 11:57 am
Keep in touch
June 27th, 2008 at 6:05 am
How Is Monkey Boy28
By Lout5